Feedback on 1st Draft

• Re-shoot lip-syncing of first couple of lines as you can't tell that they are singing.
• Try different shots without lip-syncing, show expression through different types of shots.
• Make Chloe look/feel more comfortable.
• Include shots with ben/chloe looking up at each other to show more of a relationship between the characters, e.g. shots at 1.50, 1.59.
• Include more close ups
• Mise-en-scene works well.